As time ticked by Friendship stayed kind and cheery, but his friends changed....Trust started to hang around a different crowd and started lieing and being grumpy.
Later Love started to have family problems and started becoming cruel and brutal. Even after the problems resolved se remained dull, mean, and rude.
A few days after Love and Trust had turned to the dark side, Kindness joined. After learning she had gotten a F on the Algebra test she took, she turned into a brute. She also became abusive and envious.
Friendship analyzed his situation and pouted....Where did his qualities go? Why have things changed? He only wanted what was best for his so-called friends, so he set them free. Friendship then got depressed and heart-broken. His broken heart lead to taking an over-dose on anti-depressents and shortly after, died a slow,painful, shallow death.
I like how you structured our Obituary to fit into the traits of Friendship. Friendship no longer had any real friends so he took his own death. It was unique.
ReplyDeleteThis actually sounds like a person! I found it interesting that you described the other abstract nouns and how they turned bad. NIce Job:)
ReplyDeleteI liked how you took me through friendship's life and how made friendship the example. Although this was a awesome i think you could have added some more examples.
ReplyDeleteI love the ending!! however, try to give example/quotes of Friendship.. I think it will help your Obituary fall together, and make more sense.. Or more Realistic.
ReplyDeleteReads much like a story; good ideas.
ReplyDeleteNice ending; the questions really make you think. I enjoyed your aproach to writing the obituary, very creative.
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